Question by ʎʞɔup (∂иℓ): Teens: What do you think of my poem?
Single Flame
In the darkness of the pitted sea
You are the single flame
That burns for me
In silence of the rogue night
You’re the single flame
That is burning bright
My flame, my passion
My ecstasy of life
You’re the flame…
That burns all night.
I know it is a work in progress.
Best answer:
Answer by fooodfoodfood101
its beautiful. id feel so lucky if someone gave this to me. keep it up…youre going to kill someone with the beauty of your poems 
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Quite xotic
pretty sick,
you should continue it
and make it longer.
=s
I really do like it! It’s more well written then so many others! I love it =]
It’s great. I could never write like that.
wow that’s good.
i wish i could write.
i can’t
i really like it
it’s very descriptive, and it’s a nice poem
A+ for you!
; )
=o i like it.
Poetry is cool. many times, I see people asking if their poetry is good, and i usually think it is horrible, but this is great.
I like the repetition of you are the flame or single flame.
its like a reminder and also emphasizes the intensity of the passion that the speaker has for the person.
keep up the writting (much better than my peoems xD)